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The structure worked just because there is the evolution of how their relationship changed throughout their lives. It’s not 5/5 just because the thesis is a bit brought and not on point (there is a comment about 3 part structure, but no comment on how language evolves within these paragraphs in the thesis itself)
The audience is people in their 30th because it talks about the experience of graduating, travelling, and reuniting with the family.
